गजल
-नेपोलियन मरहट्टा-
गास,बास र अलिकती कपास देउ देशलाई,
अहिल्यै लाश नबनाउ, सास देउ देशलाई ।
राजनीतिको चोली भित्र कती बाँध्छौ खुम्च्याएर ?
कहिले काही चोली खोली,आकाश देउ देशलाई ।
अन्धकार भित्र धेरै तड्पिएर बस्नु हुन्न,
बिकासको घाम तापी प्रकाश देउ देशलाई ।
हरियाली आउन फेरी अर्को ऋतु कुर्नु पर्छ,
अहिले नै बिचार गरी,मधुमास देउ देशलाई ।
भोली कहिल्यै आउँदैन,भोली-भोली नभन है ?
तिर्खा मेटी थोरै आज मिठास देउ देशलाई ।
फेरी बाढि आउन सक्छ, कोशीको झैँ छताछुल्ल,
अलिकती भएपनि निकास देउ देशलाई ।
nepoleon_b@yahoo.com



WOW,,,,,
VERY NICE, PLEASE CONTINUE THIS POEM.
I REALLY LIKE THESE SHORTS OF POEMS,KEEP ON WRITING .I REALLY LOVE YOURS POEM.
OK GO ON CONTINUE,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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Very nice.
thank you….
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very very nice.Situational Gajal.
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Good evening Mr. Nepoleon
It is not necessary to understand the value of gold to goldsmith. But who put on the ornament should knows the value of gold otherwise value of gold will come to be equal to almunium for those. So, let’s assume ur poem is stand in the place of gold and just i am a ornament wearer not goldsmith wheras goldsmith always care for profit and loss at the same time wearer leave profit and loss at any dark corner.
Yes may u got it, really impressive and energitic poem this time also.
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veri nice thank you
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namaskar ,maile hajur ko gajal padhe dherai ramro lagyo,sadhai yestai gajal kabita haru padhna paiyos ,thanyou.
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