तिमीमा हराएँ
-विश्वराज न्यौपाने
सपना वा बिपना खै के मा हराएँ,
मायालु ति तिम्रा गुनगुन मा हराएँ,
न्यानो त्यो स्पर्श काखको शिरानी,
माया पोखिएको बिस्कुन मा हराएँ,
तिम्रै लागी कोरिएका प्रेम का गीत
संगीत को मधुर धुन मा हराएँ,
झिस्मिसे साँझ त्यो धिप्धिपे दियालो,
तिमी संगै रूझेको मनसुन मा हराएँ,
तिम्रै यादमा सुदुरको जीवन,
तिमी जस्तै कोमल जुन मा हराएँ,
प्रती-बिम्ब हेर्दै जुन मा हराएँ ।।।
हेटौंडा-०३,देवीपथ
हाल-दमाम (साउदी आरेबिया) ।
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very nice
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your try is good writing style also not bad, ok don’t leave writing habit in future you will be good writer.
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Ramro chha ……………………….
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i like so much plus ,i wanna say some thing
ABOUT MONEY,
TO MAKE MONEYWE LOSE OUR HEALTH,
AND THEN TO RESTORE OUR HEALTH WE LOSE OUR MONEY………..
WE LIVE AS IF WE ARE NEVER GOING TO DIE,
AND WE DIE ASIF WE NEVER LIVED…………
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TIWARI BHANJYANG ONE
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Let Michael Jackson’s Soul Remain Peace in heaven! At times I think I hear you The thoughts come to my mind. I struggle for the sound of your voice, But your voice I cannot find. Our lives on earth seem all too brief, Or brief as it seems to me. But where you are is forever, God calls that Eternity! FEELING UPSET WITH THE DEAD OF MICHAEL JACKSON!
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तिमी सँगै रुझेको मन्सुन मा हराएँ
Nice poem carry on.
thank you.
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good
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dherai ramro 6, thanks
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OK thik cha la.
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nice poem, i like it so much.and i hope,i can get to read as like poem again.ALL THE BEST.
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Every time i think that i dont like to read your poem but unfortunatelly i my self found reading your poem every day once in my office hour also.
From my side (personaly) it is best not good i have no any other word in my dictionary to express about your poem except it.
Best…………………………………………………………
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