युग र म
विद्या सापकोटा ‘निर्जला‘
म एउटा निरिह मान्छे,
मैले एक छाकको जोहो गर्न नसकिरहेको बेला,
मेरा सन्ततिहरु, ल्यापटप नसके मोवाइल किनिदिन भनिरहेका छन् ।।
म खालि पैताला सडक नापिरहेको बेला,
मेरा भविष्यहरु, कार नसके मोटर साइकल (भनि) चिच्याइरहेका छन् ।।
मेरा बच्चाहरु फि नतिरेकोले गलहत्तिइरहँदा,
मेरा साथिहरु तारे होटलमा करोडौंको वाजी लगाइरहेका हुन्छन् ।।
मेरा नानीहरु प्रेममा पागल बनिरहेको बेला,
‘मेरै प्रतिनिधित्व गरेर स्टार वनेको नायक‘, लेभल तोकिरहेको छ ।।
म नुन किन्न नसकेर छटपटाइरहँदा,
मेरै अर्धागिङ्गी ‘यस्तो उस्तो नभए‘ माइत जाने घुर्की देखाइरहेकी हुन्छे ।।
साँच्चै यो के भइरहेका छ ? दोष दिउँ त कसलाइ दिउ ?
सायद ! अबुझ होइनन् मेरा आफ्नाहरु,
फड्को मारिरहने समयकेा खेल मात्र हो
कमजोर पनी हैनन् मेरा नानीहरु
पासा थापिरहने ‘शकुनी‘ नियतीको खेल हो ।।
साँच्चै, यो युग मलाइ हराउन हात धोएर लागि परेको छ
यो समय मलाइ अत्याउन भुत वनेर पछ्याइरहेको छ ।।
म एउटा निरिह मान्छे, न त, जीवन ढल्न दिन सक्छु
न त सम्हालेर जीउन नै सक्छु, (कोहि त) भन म के गरु ?
कल्याणपुर ७, नुवाकोट
हाल : शंकरदेव कलेज, काठमाडौं ।
nirjala0008@gmail.com/sapkota.bidhya@yahoo.com


ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! what a great & lovely poem yar. Tapaiko kabitaleta mero mann chhoyo. Aaba tapai yuglai bhujera aagadi badnus hai. GREAT POEM
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Hello,
nice.
We get a new participate in the regular contest of ” who is the most displorable person of the world”. So Plz,do not stop your race, May you are going to be winner.
Thanks for your new creation.
Hahahahahahahahah……………………..hahahhahahhah…….Hainata?
Lykaudinya,
Dammam,
Saudi Arabia.
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wow……….very effective poem u wrote and we want to read more more poem like this soon thanks
yubaraj (prince)
Camp Dragon.
Iraq
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” sabai nepali ko samasya ho yao tasaila ta bidasenu parako cha ”
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Hi Bidhay jee,
How to write you? It is really nice .
You can rock……………….best of luck
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Bidhya Jee
Tahnk you for nice poem.
Tapai sachchai ramro lekhnu hun6. sachai yo yug hamilai harauna lagi pareko 6
साँच्चै, यो युग मलाइ हराउन हात धोएर लागि परेको छ
यो समय मलाइ अत्याउन भुत वनेर पछ्याइरहेको छ ।।
it is our common reality
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chinta mannu pardaina aznabi bro…tapain ko samasyako hall tapain kai Agadi chha nee…na chinta garnush na,,, santati haru ko lagi…na chinta garnush na aafno future ko lagi…sutukka sunnush hai kassai lai na bhannush yo mantar…aazai bata ( NETAGIRI ) suru garnush NETA bannush tapain ko sabai samasya chuwat…Nepali NETA haru ko kassam…
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Hi Nirjala, i can understand your poem, i know you are a great poet, your poem was effected my heaet, and you should living in the earth i want to hear your poem until end of my life. god will be help you to compose many poem as it is. our human life is not same. some peoples are making enjoy without nay difficult, some peoples are doing hard works for living in the earth. i will be involving with that persons who will doing hard works for living in the earth. i want to tell you 1 story. once upon a time 2 animals living in the forest 1 monkey and other one is turtle. one day both of them they were visiting to the forest at the time they found banana tree. both of them they are become greedy. they decide themselves to divide the banana tree by 2 parts. but they have problem who will take upper part of tree or lower part of tree. one of them monkey was more clever then turtle. monkey explain to turtle my friend you can’t climb on the tree. how you get banana from the tree. you should take lower part of tree. turtle was agree with monkey. (monkey was clever but did not think about the future. monkey get upper part of tree and he get many banana. but turtle he was lonely because he has no banana because he has lower part of tree. but he hard work to grow that banana tree. after few years turtle has banana garden and he has many banana. but he has problem he can not climb to the tree. and he went to the monkey to get help from monkey. after that they understand about the friendship. what we get from this story. we should co-ordinate with one another and we have to share everything one person to another person.
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यथार्थ वर्णन गर्ने एकदम राम्रो प्रयास ,भन्छन नि “स|हित्य समाजको दर्पण हो “
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Ho ta Bidhya Jee,
It is our common problem. Thanks for write it by lovely style.
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Bidhya Jee,
Samasamayaik bishyama kalam chalaunubhayako 6. Dherai ramro creation garnu bhayako 6. Ajha lekhdai janu hola ………..Dipawaliko Shubhkamana !!
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Bidhya Jee,
Yati ramro lekhne manchhelai hamile chahi herna napaune??
poem sagai photo pani 6paunus na hai??
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Hi Bidhya Jee,
Tapaeko Poem Dherai Ramro Chha. Sadhai Bhari Yesari Nai Padhana Paeyos.
Garibharu ani Dukhoharuko Barema Lekhnu Bhayo Bhane Sabaile Man Parauchhan. Samay anusar Lekhdai Januhola. Tapaelae Yehi Subhakamana ani Pargatiko Ligi Badhae Dina Chahanchhu.
UAE, SHARJAH
AIRPORT
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It is good that Nepali people from different parts of the world are enjoying your poem. But mostly, there are lot of comment from Gulf countries. I do not know when they get time to sit on computer, read and write their comments! Wonderful,, please go ahead!
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Bidhya Jee,
Yo yug sayad hami garib hareuko birudhma utreko jasto alg6 tar k garnu? Hajurle yasto ramro lekhnu hun6 ani ta tyasai khusi lag6.
happy Tihar
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bidhya ji to much good poemso thanks fo u i am not getting any think. i am also same this poem now a day i am change my life staiel ok thanks for u ok bye
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बिद्याजी तपाईंको कबिताले नेपालीहरुको आधुनिकिकरनमा आएको बिसङ्तिलाई बोध गरेको छ। नेपालीहरुको यो चरित्र ‘घान्टी हेरी हाड निल्नु’ को ठीक उल्टो हो। यो चरित्र पूँजीवादएे चिन्तन्को अन्ध नक्कल हो। यस्ले जनता र देशको अधो गती बाहेक केही फाईदा छैन । यो सन्स्कृतिको बिरुधमा लग्नु हामी युबाहरुको कर्तब्य हुन आएको छ।
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HI Bidhya jee,
Tapaika kabita sarai ramra 6n, maile kalika fm ko magaginema pani padeko thiya, tyaha jastai photo sahit publish garnus na yaha pani….an ,ajakal Kata haraun bho ??
Pragatiko kamana !!
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nothing to do, but just Ask for ur Man (Manlai Sodhnu).
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